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The Dos and Don’ts of Writers’ Conferences: Part 3

Wednesday, May 16th, 2012

Welcome to the third part of my series on how to get the most out of attending a writers’ conference. Today we move on to the conference itself.

A writers’ conference can be a bit overwhelming, especially if you’ve chosen to attend one of the larger ones. The best approach is to make note of workshops and other sessions that you don’t want to miss, then fill in the rest of your time with more flexible scheduling that allows you some leeway for networking or catching a bit of quiet time if you feel the need to regroup.

When you first arrive at the conference, you will check in and receive your attendees’ packet. This will include your name badge and an assortment of other materials, generally including a list of presenters with their bios; a full schedule of sessions, meals, entertainment and so on; your pitch appointment information if that was assigned ahead; and various flyers from any conference sponsors. It’s a good idea to head to your room or a fairly empty corner and go through everything as soon as you are able. Make a list of your must-see events and decide what else you might like to check out. Workshops and other presentations often follow tracks, with sessions focusing on writing craft, finding an agent, marketing skills, self-publishing, and so on. Even a writer just starting out can get great information in all of these areas, so don’t limit yourself to just one track unless you have very specific goals in mind.

Most conferences have some sort of mixer or opening presentation or both. Make a point to attend these sorts of events, because they will help you get an overview of the conference. Announcements often include information regarding contests, raffles, and/or auctions that are being held. These can be a great way to discover new writers, get autographed books, pick up some new writing aids, or in some cases even win free or reduced registration for a future conference. They’re also a nice opportunity to meet some new people. Even if you’re attending with friends, make an effort to broaden your acquaintances. Conference attendees are always more than happy to share their previous conference experiences or to compare notes as fellow first-timers.

If you have any sort of appointment during the conference, whether for a pitch or a blue pencil session or another type of meeting with an agent, editor, or author, be sure that you are clear as to when it is and where you need to be. If your pitch falls in the middle or toward the end of a set of workshops, feel free to attend one of the sessions if you like; simply sit or stand at the back of the room and slip out early to make your appointment. Just make sure you keep an eye on the clock and allow yourself sufficient time to get wherever you’re going. If your phone has an alarm feature that you can set to vibrate, consider setting yourself a reminder. However, if you’re concerned that you might lose track of time and miss your meeting, skip attending a workshop during that time slot.

Be prompt for your pitch/blue pencil appointment, and don’t forget to take your pad and pen, your pitch notes, and the folder with your opening chapters from your story. The first you will use to jot down information you get during your meeting, including what the agent or editor has asked to see if they request material, and answers to any questions you might ask. Remember that you will only offer your sample pages if the agent or editor asks if you have anything on hand. Otherwise, just take them with you when you finish your appointment. Try to keep in mind that the person you are meeting with is there to help, that they are a fellow booklover, and that they want to fall in love with what you’ve written. That is why they are there.

A writers’ conference can be a pretty high energy endeavor and you should go prepared to burn the candle at both ends. Evenings, following the formal workshops, are often filled with less structured events. Some will appear on the conference schedule, while others you will hear about through word of mouth. People will gather in the bar or lounge, sometimes there will be small parties in hotel suites, and attendees often arrange to go sightseeing or out to eat beyond the confines of the conference venue. Keep your ears open, chat with your fellow writers, and take advantage of these fun opportunities to mingle. They can make for a long day, but you can sleep when the conference is over.

 

A few things to keep in mind:

  • You will hear lots of advice from writers at all stages of their careers. Listen and filter. Everyone’s experience is different, so what works for one writer might not be appropriate for you. Keep an open mind, but also use your own best judgment.
  • Remember that the professionals attending the conference are there to help. They are agents and editors looking for new material, and published writers looking to give back to the writing community. But they are also people. No doubt they will be happy to chat, to give advice, to listen to your pitch, but remember to be polite and use common sense when approaching them. Don’t interrupt anyone mid-conversation. Don’t chase someone down the hall when they are obviously trying to get to the next workshop/pitch session, etc. Don’t try to pitch anyone in the restroom or when they have a mouthful of their lunch.
  • Plenty of socializing takes place over drinks. Keep your limits in mind and be moderate in your alcohol intake. No one wants to be remembered as the writer who got so tipsy they slid off their bar stool and cracked their head open.
  • Don’t be shy. These are your people.

 

Next week I’ll be back with the final installment in my series on writers’ conferences, discussing what to do after the conference is over. In the meantime, happy writing!

~Nephele Tempest

5/16/2012

The Dos and Don’ts of Writers’ Conferences: Part 2

Wednesday, May 9th, 2012

Welcome to the second installment in our series on writers’ conferences. Last week, I looked at ways to determine whether you are ready to attend a writers’ conference, and how to choose the best type of conference for your needs. This week, I’m moving on to conference prep.

You’ve chosen a conference, filled out your registration forms, and made your travel plans. There’s money down, and you are committed to spending a few days rubbing elbows with writers of all sorts and talking up some agents in the bar. Now what? How do you prepare so you can get the most out of your conference experience?

 

What should you bring… 

To wear? Conferences are not formal affairs, but nor are they a giant slumber party (though you may feel as if you’ve attended one by the time you get home). Leave the ratty jeans and sweats at home. Bring comfortable, casual business clothing, shoes you can stand in if you find yourself at the back of a crowded workshop without a seat, and some layers that you can use to adjust to drafty hotel hallways or overheated conference rooms. If the conference schedule includes a more formal affair, bring a nicer outfit for that occasion (no hiding out in your hotel room).

For networking? You’re going to meet many new people at the conference, and you should take every opportunity to talk to them. Many writers make up business cards, and networking is the place to put those to use. They are not a must-have, but they make it easy to trade contact information when you hit it off with someone at a conference. Don’t forget that these folks are your peers, and they might end up your next critique buddy, a great source for marketing advice, or just an ear to bend over your latest round of rejection letters. Keep your business cards simple: include your name, email, phone if you feel comfortable, and blog/web site URL if you have one. You can always email each other with additional information later. Bring a letter-sized envelope that you can keep tucked in your bag or notebook where you can accumulate business cards from the event, so they don’t get lost.

To work? Bring your laptop if you plan to get some writing done during the conference. You’ll see many diligent people getting their daily word counts done in the lobby or the hotel lounge. The reality is you might not write during the conference; there are many other things vying for your time, and that’s fine. But it’s a good idea to have your computer with you regardless. You should also make sure you have a notebook and several pens to bring with you to the various conference events, including workshops and pitch sessions. If at all possible, refrain from taking notes during sessions straight onto your computer, as the sound of people tapping away in the audience can distract your presenter.

Of your writing? If the conference includes any sort of blue-pencil sessions—where an agent, editor, or writer reads and critiques your work—they will tell you what to bring in the way of sample material. Beyond that, most agents and editors prefer not to be handed pages from your manuscript during a pitch session. However most is not all. Some agents and editors are happy to take sample pages and will even ask if you have some. So, better safe than sorry. Bring hard copy of the first three chapters of your manuscript and a brief synopsis (1-2 pages) in a folder or envelope. Make sure your name and contact information is on your writing sample. This way, if an agent or editor asks if you have pages with you, you will be able to provide them immediately.

 

What should you do… 

To prep for the pitch session? A pitch is basically a verbal version of what you would put on the back cover of your book. It’s that brief, enticing glimpse at your story that makes someone else want to read the entire thing. Tell your listener what your story is about in a few sentences, including who your main characters are, what they want, and what is standing in their way. Give two or three brief examples of their adventures/mishaps/challenges.

You should definitely write up your pitch and practice delivering it, but also take that write up with you when you go to the pitch session itself. No agent or editor will object if you need to read your pitch because you’re nervous. Far better to have the notes than to drop your head into your hands and bemoan the fact that your mind has gone completely blank.

Pitch one project unless the agent or editor asks what else you have. A second pitch, if requested, should be more of an elevator pitch – one or two lines that give a brief intro to the story and the protagonist. Do not worry if you only have one finished project to pitch.

If you prepare your pitch well, you will probably have a couple of minutes left after you’ve presented and the agent/editor has asked questions (unless you have extremely short pitch sessions). This is a good time to ask any industry questions you might have, especially if they pertain to the agent/editor with whom you’re meeting. So jot down a few questions in your notebook before the conference, so you have them on hand if there is time to ask them.

To determine your schedule? The conference web site may or may not have the actual program schedule posted before the event. If it does, you can easily go through ahead of time and see which topics/speakers interest you. If not, you should take a look at the list of presenters who are attending the conference and do a little research on anyone with whom you are not familiar. If you have time, read a couple of books by some of the speakers you don’t know to get a feel for their style and to see if you might be interested in their workshops/presentations. But keep in mind that you can learn a great deal from many of these speakers, even if they don’t write in your particular genre.

Before you leave for the conference? Make a packing list and use it to check off everything you want to take. Get a good night’s sleep so you’re energized for the event. Relax and look forward to a great conference experience.

Next week: How to handle the conference itself. See you then!

~Nephele Tempest

5/9/2012

The Dos and Don’ts of Writers’ Conferences: Part 1

Wednesday, May 2nd, 2012

We are in the opening weeks of writers’ conference season, that period from spring through late autumn when the majority of writers’ conferences are held. While attending one is not a prerequisite for a career as a writer, these events do offer a wide range of programming and opportunities that can be quite helpful for anyone intent on publication or looking to expand their readership. And so, over several weeks, I am going to break down the benefits of attending a writers’ conference, what you might think about when choosing one, how to prepare, and how to make the most of your experience once the conference is underway.

Are you ready for a writers’ conference?

There are writers’ conferences that cater to all levels of experience, from brand new writers to multi-published authors. What you need to ask yourself is what you hope to get from a conference, and whether now is the time to achieve your goals.

Are you a newbie writer with only a few chapters under your belt, looking for encouragement? You might consider a class or writing group to start, since it’s far too early to consider the publishing advice that makes up a large portion of most conference schedules. But if you’ve finished a manuscript and maybe tackled some rewrites, then a conference could give you some additional tips on revising, polishing, and prepping your project for submission.

Have several manuscripts under your belt? Maybe collecting some rejection letters? By all means attend a conference. You’ll gain access to professional providing advice on how to jump some of those submissions hurdles, plus the chance to chat with writers who have been where you are now.

How do you choose a writers’ conference?

Writers’ conferences come in all shapes and sizes, and so you need to make some decisions regarding what you’re hoping to achieve, and what feels most comfortable to you. Ask yourself some basic questions and keep your responses in mind while you’re reading the descriptions of the conferences on offer.

  • Are you willing to travel? Conferences are held all over the country, but travel can be an added expense. Consider your budget in relation to the cost of getting to the conference as well as registration fees, etc.
  • Genre versus general? Are you emphatically a writer of mysteries? Romances? Then a genre-themed conference is probably an excellent place for you to meet writers, agents, and editors who focus on what you write. However, if you’re interested in writing more mainstream fiction or multiple genres, a writers conference that offers a mix of programming relating to various markets might be a better choice.
  • What is your primary interest? Is the main draw of a conference the chance to speak with editors and agents? Or are you interested in more educational tracks, with tips on plotting, character development, writing a synopsis, etc.? Looking to learn how to market your book and build your audience? Some conferences offer all of the above, while others focus more in specific areas. Consider the balance of programming and whether it addresses your needs.
  • Is it important for you to pitch to an agent or editor? The reality is that you can always submit to an agent per their standard submissions guidelines, but many writers appreciate the chance to pitch in person and meet an agent or editor face-to-face. If this is an important feature for you, check the ratio of agents and editors to attendees, and try to attend a conference where these meetings are a focus. You want a high number of agents and editors in relation to writers, and/or a large portion of the programming schedule devoted to pitch appointments.
  • How much are you willing to spend? No one ever said that writers’ conferences were inexpensive. Consider your budget in relation to the conferences that meet your other needs. If something costs a little more than you planned to spend, but offers everything you are looking for in a conference, you might want to wait a year and save up to attend. Alternatively, look for several less expensive options that provide only part of your desired schedule and attend one per year. You’ll meet a broader range of people and possibly learn even more.

Check back next Wednesday for the second installment of this series on writers’ conferences, when I’ll be discussing ways to get ready for your conference — including how to plan for the dreaded pitch appointment.

~Nephele Tempest

5/2/2012

Agent Q&A

Wednesday, April 25th, 2012

It’s been a while since I did one of these, so I thought I’d stop by and find out what sorts of burning questions you all have these days. For those of you who are unfamiliar with the premise, you post questions you have about publishing, writing, finding an agent, etc. down in the comments section of this thread. I will return late this evening or early tomorrow morning and answer a few of them at random — generally three to five, but sometimes more if I have the time.

So, have at it. What do you all want to know? Please try to keep the questions at least somewhat general. This is not the place to pitch your idea or ask about specific plot points in your book unless it’s something that can be applied to a broader spectrum. Thanks!

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The Last Pass: Preparing Your Manuscript for Submission

Wednesday, April 18th, 2012

It seems like forever since you started your novel. You completed a first draft, reread, revised. You tore it into pieces and put it back together again. Your critique partners have given you tons of advice, and your mother — naturally — thinks it’s a perfect work of art.

But is your manuscript actually ready?

By ready, of course, I mean ready to submit to agents. There’s nothing more frustrating than having an agent love your query, praise your opening chapters, and then reject your completed manuscript. It happens. It happens often, in fact. Even once I’ve requested the full, there’s an excellent chance I’m still going to pass, for any number of reasons. Sometimes it becomes clear fairly early on that the first chapters got most of the attention, while the rest of the story still needs some serious work. Other times the pacing lags — the middle is dull, the characters go off in some inexplicable direction, or the elements of the story start to fall apart. Occasionally weird things start to happen and I find myself scratching my head, wondering if I mistakenly picked up a different book part way through.

The saddest rejection for me to write, however, is for the manuscript where I read from start to finish and discover it’s just not quite ready yet. Perhaps the ending was unsatisfying or anti-climactic. Or the story worked, but the writing itself feels unpolished and unprofessional. With these sorts of reading experiences, I will try to send the writer some helpful suggestions and encourage them to resubmit if they’re willing to do the work. Occasionally I see the project again, but more often I don’t.

Ideally, you will cut these problems off at the pass, long before you put your precious baby into the hands of your dream agent. One more pass through the story can make or break your chances for success. Here’s a list of things to look for when you feel like your manuscript might be finished:

  • Do you start your plot early, but not so early that the reader has no idea who your protagonist is? Early action is great — and important to engage the reader — but a sense of the status quo before the events of your story is necessary as well.
  • Does your protagonist experience ups and downs along the route of the story, with tension climbing toward the climax?
  • Does your protagonist have some flaws or are they too perfect? Likewise, does your antagonist have some redeeming qualities that make him/her realistic? Are these revealed through their emotions and actions?
  • Is your point of view consistent throughout the book? (Meaning, do you maintain your chosen system of POV,  not necessarily that you only have a single POV.) Have you kept your tenses straight throughout as well?
  • Do all your characters have something they want/that motivates them, not just your protagonist and antagonist? Are these characters all distinguished from each other and necessary to the story?
  • Does each scene advance your story in some important way, even sex scenes (if you have them)?
  • Have you reviewed the entire manuscript for your own personal “favorites” — those words you tend to use too frequently? Have you cut out unnecessary adverbs, dialogue attributions (he screamed, she exclaimed, they questioned…), facial expressions used as filler (blinking, smiling, grinning, frowning, biting of lips, etc.)?
  • Does the pacing of the story feel consistent and appropriate to the action?
  • Is your conclusion satisfying? Do you tie up all the ends without relying on conveniences or coincidences? Have you left any major questions unanswered?
  • Has your protagonist achieved their goal/learned his/her lesson/come out the other side of this adventure truly changed?

It often helps to set aside your completed manuscript for a few weeks before tackling this list. That way you can come at the material with fresh eyes and any issues will be more likely to jump out at you.

 

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Agent Q&A!

Wednesday, June 8th, 2011

Have burning questions about how to get an agent? Wondering whether your manuscript is ready to submit? Feeling a little overwhelmed by the process? Well, ask your questions and I will attempt to answer.

Agent Q&A works like this: Post your questions on this thread, and I will come back later today or early tomorrow and provide some responses. I can’t promise to answer all the questions–the thread can get a little long sometimes–but I will answer at least three and I’ll do my best to get a good range of answers out there for you.

So? What would you like to know?

~Nephele

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Agent Q&A

Wednesday, April 13th, 2011

Hey there, everyone. I’m a bit late today thanks to a busy morning, but I have not forgotten that today is Agent Q&A Day! For those of you new to this TKA feature, I drop by once a month and ask you to post all of your burning questions about publishing, writing, getting an agent and so on. Just ask away in the comments section of this thread. Then I’ll come back and provide some answers. I’ll be sure to answer a minimum of three questions, more if I have time. (Last month I think I answered pretty much everything.)

So, what would you like to know? Post away! I’ll probably answer tomorrow morning to give everyone a chance to get their questions up this evening.

~Nephele

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Agent Q&A

Wednesday, March 9th, 2011

Hey there, everyone. Apologies for the lateness today. My schedule has been a bit on the insane side recently. However, I’m here and ready to answer whatever questions you feel like throwing my way.

For those of you who have not participated before, it’s very simple. Post your questions about publishing, getting an agent, the agency and so on in the comments section below. I’ll come back later this evening or early tomorrow and answer at least three of them–more if time allows.

So, what would you like to know? Go ahead and ask.

~Nephele

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Agent Q&A Day!

Wednesday, January 12th, 2011

Happy hump day, everyone! Aside from being Wednesday, it’s also the second Wednesday of the month, which means it’s time for me to answer a few of your burning questions.

For those of you who haven’t played along before, you all post your questions about getting an agent, publishing, writing and so on in the comments of this thread. Then I’ll come back some time later tonight or early tomorrow morning and answer a few of them–at least three, more if I can. If you’re new to this, you might also like to check the blog archives for the last couple of Q&As, since your question might already have been answered.

So, let me have them? What would you like to me to chat about to kick off this brand new year? (And don’t forget to check back for answers!)

~Nephele

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Agent Q&A!

Wednesday, December 8th, 2010

Happy Hump Day everyone! And question day, as well. I’m back to answer your burning questions about getting an agent, publishing and so on. For those of you who didn’t play along last month, here’s how it works:

Post your question to me in the comments section below. I will come back later this evening/early tomorrow and answer three of them at random. (Could be more, but probably not because it’s insanely busy around here right now.)

That’s all there is to it! So, whatcha want to know?

~Nephele

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